|
|
Post by sim on Jul 30, 2007 10:30:44 GMT -5
I can't read your mind. Because your thoughts are not mine. So to me, Love is blind.
The flowers are blooming great this spring.
But there are no roses to feel the void of a heart that bleeds.
Norrow to the touch and blind to the smell.
You should be so lucky to tell.With all of my heart, I hear those three words.
But are they the truth and roses?
Or is it filled with thorns of a broken promise.
I cant read your mind. Because your thoughts are not mine. So to me, Love is blind
Author: Sim
|
|
|
|
Post by charliegirl on Jul 30, 2007 14:58:23 GMT -5
Thats very good Sim and I love your first line. Its so very true.
|
|
|
|
Post by sim on Jul 31, 2007 9:25:09 GMT -5
Thanks. I have a bunch more but i din't want to spam the board with them  This one seems to be the most popular |
|
|
|
Post by charliegirl on Jul 31, 2007 13:23:21 GMT -5
Go ahead and post them. We love to see original works by our members.  |
|
|
|
Post by misty on Jul 31, 2007 13:31:30 GMT -5
Post away, Sim! I want to see the rest! Why don't you start a thread just for your poems & you can add them in replies to the thread?
|
|
|
|
Post by jj on Jul 31, 2007 13:46:23 GMT -5
Yes, we want more!!!  |
|
|
|
Post by sim on Aug 1, 2007 9:10:49 GMT -5
lol you guys are great. ok here is another one for you!
The Hole
Down in a little hole,
Is where the simple dwell.
put there by depression,
And held there by a spell.
I try to go up,
and I get pushed down,
Depression sets in,
And I don't make a sound.
Who cares about me,
no one thats who.
They put me down,
and say its untrue.
I try to go up,
and I get pushed down,
Depression sets in,
And I don't make a sound.
And what if I fail,
would you be there to help?
Do I have to cry out,
do I have to yelp?
I try to go up,
and I get pushed down,
Depression sets in,
And I don't make a sound.
Please don't forget me,
Sitting here alone.
I need a guiding heart,
for my feet to rome.
I try to go up,
and I get pushed down,
Depression sets in,
And I don't make a sound.
Author: Sim
|
|
|
|
Post by katiekat on Aug 1, 2007 10:47:02 GMT -5
That's really good Sim.  |
|
|
|
Post by charliegirl on Aug 1, 2007 13:52:54 GMT -5
I really liked that one! More please! |
|
|
|
Post by katiekat on Aug 1, 2007 23:23:13 GMT -5
Hey Sim- Check out this site www.poetry.comMy aunt actually won one month and they published her poem in a book. |
|
I was about to conquer the world but then I got distracted by something shiny.
