A poem I wrote

[Kristin]

If I told you that I was once living what would you say?
What if I told you about the endless land I saw with nothing in the way?
Would you believe me if I told you it was possible for me to breath and not cough
Or that I found breathtaking beauty as a spider ate a moth?
And what about the time when you invaded my home?
I watched my family fall one by one,
as I stood there all alone.
Then with one final swing,
my body splintered away,
As I left my forever home,
not knowing where I'd stay.
If I told you about my life,
as my body was cut to shreds,
how would you feel,
knowing that because of you I'm dead?
So is this how you ever thought dieing would be?
And did you know that this paper you hold in your hands is in fact made out of me?

Makes more scene if it was on paper...but its about a tree.

[charliegirl]

I was getting worried about your state of mind until I saw it was about a tree.

Now that I know you aren't suicidal, its a very nice poem. Very descriptive. You are very creative.

[misty]

I agree, it tricked me at first as well. Very creative. I love it!

[jj]

Another one fooled but what a great poem. My best poem start out like, "Roses are red".....lol My sister is an amazing poem writer just like you! I really enjoyed yours, once I knew what it was about.